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Today ,travel is very popular in our life ,especially in China .Everytime ,when the holiday comes ,each and every tourist spot is full of so many people .When you go into the tourist spots ,you just can see the head of people . Eventhough ,the tourist spots like this ,there are many people also have a large enthusiasm about travel .In my opinion ,there are several reasons about why do people travel. First of all ,with the social development ,people faced with heavy work every day ,presure become bigger and bigger .And our boold pressure is too high .To reduce our pressure ,we need a vacation somewhere tropical .Forthermore ,we live in the forest of steel , the relationship between human become more and more indifferent .We almost don't communicate with others .The intimate friens become les and les .Third ,we just want to see some beautiful scenery that from the travel .Beautiful things always make people feel happy . To sum up ,people go to travel for reducing their pressure and finding some thing that we have lost .
