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作者词汇基础不错，在高级词汇的积累上还要再接再厉；句法知识掌握不错，但文中从句数量偏少；全文结构较为严谨。
Today ,travel is very popular in our life ,especially in China .Everytime ,when the holiday comes ,each and every tourist spot is full of so many people .When you go into the tourist spots ,you just can see the head of people . Eventhough ,the tourist spots like this ,there are many people also have a large enthusiasm about travel .In my opinion ,there are several reasons about why do people travel. First of all ,with the social development ,people faced with heavy work every day ,pressure become bigger and bigger .And our blood pressure is too high .To reduce our pressure ,we need a vacation somewhere tropical .Furthermore ,we live in the forest in the steel , the relationship between human become more and more indifferent .We almost don't communicate with others .The intimate friends become les and les .Third ,we just want to get some beautiful things from the travel ,such as friendship ,the relax of our spirit and beautiful senery .Beautiful things always make people feel happy . To sum up ,people go to travel for reducing their pressure and finding something that we have lost .
