2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

文中从句数量不足；采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；文中高级词汇不足。

I'm very glad that hear you will come to my hometown ,this is my pleasure. my hometown is a beautiful small village where has wildly of mountain, vastly of ground and clear rivier. I was played with some insects everyday in my backyard when I was 8 years old.and now I am 21 years old teen,but that place was my childhood very like interesing place. my hometown wasn't have many famous landscape which like The Great Wall etc, and there is only have my some memories and some emotion of my secrets. To be honest , I really don't know you whether understand my means what my hometown in your eyes maybe isn't interesting totally but in my heart is my heaven. So if you come this place, you maybe just feel some power of nature, and eat some fresh fruits and vegetable.beacsue my hometown isn't a big city ,is just a small place where you even don't know this place in China.My hometown is to feel the heart, not to see with eyes.