2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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Nowadays,more and more people like shopping online which leads to it becomes a fashion.All things have two sides.In spite of convenience than others ways, it also brings about some potential problems. We can't know whether the goods which are bought online are satisfy us, if not, it will waste more time and money to retreat them.Although shopping online maybe save time and make it convenient to us especially when we are lazy to go outside,it push us to spend more money than used as well.Mostly, when we buy goods online, we have to provide our information to strangers, it maybe has potential dangerous.Unfortunately,most of us hardly have the concensus to protect ourselves. From my opinion, expect protecting our personal information,going to the market for shopping is not only health to our body but also give us time to communicate to our friends that could improving our realitionship.