2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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Nowadays,growing individuals like shopping online which leads to a fashion.All things have two sides.In spite of the convenience, it also brings some potential troubles. We can't know whether the goods which are purchased online are satisfying us, if not, it will waste more time and money to return or exchange them.Although shopping online may save time and make it convenient to us especially when we are lazy to go outside,it pushs us to spend more money than used as well.Mostly, when we buy goods online, we have to provide our information to strangers, it maybe has potential dangerous.Unfortunately,most of us hardly have the concensus to protect ourselves. From my opinion, expect protect our personal information,going to the market for shopping is not only health to our body but also give us time to communicate to our friends that could improving our realitionship.