字数:200满分:100分
采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;文中词汇使用灵活,高级词汇使用较丰富;作者在句法层面做的很棒。
As is shown above, we can see two athlete , playing on the ground. One is getting ready to shooting, while another is concentrating on keeping the goal. What’s funny, in the striker’s eyes, the goalkeeper is as huge as the goal, conversely, the goalkeeper thinks himself too tiny to win the game. It’s not hard for us to conclude that both of them need more confidence to finish their work. Actually, not only them are short of confidence, most of our teenagers are as well. In talking with some classmates who are preparing for the Postgraduate entrance examination, I gather the impression that most of them are lacking of confidence to pass the exam. And this anxiety entail them can’t devote to study, finally fail the exam. Instead, being confident make things different. The distinction between great person and average person is that the greats are always brave to take the first step and firmly believe that they will succeed. Self-confidence, however, never means overestimate your abilities blindly and stupidly, you also need more endeavor to uphold your dream. Brave enough, trust yourself and keep going then success is sure.