字数:200满分:100分
作者词汇基本功很好,高级词汇表达也比较恰当;句法方面做得很棒,但是从句不多;不能熟练使用过渡词,基本没有衔接词。
What a rare opportunity here! Please see this information. As we know, on Friday this week, the music hall will hold an international conference concerning globalization. More importantly, there is significant news about you. To prepare everything well to the coming meet, we need six volunteers to help to establish details of accommodation, eating and say "hello" to the foreigners, who are excellent experts from all the world. It is prefer that participants can speak English frequently and have previous experience regarding to face-to-face communication with foreigners. If you are interested in this chance, please send your resume to our office or contact 1234567 without hesitation. Welcome all of you take part in us.