字数:200满分:100分
作者句法知识扎实,但从句稍微偏少;作者词汇基础扎实,拼写也很棒;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。
A big hotpot, burning, with fumes flying to the air, has many "foodstuffs", such as Enlightment, Peking Opera, Kong Fu, Confucianism and so on. The caption under the cartoon says, "the Cultural Hotpot is Delicious and Nutritious". Conspicuously, what the drawer intends to remind us of is not a simple picture which has deep meaning. Serious concern about the integration of global culture in the more and more global development world can we infer from the picture immediately. In the several respects, we corporate with other countries which have complementary advantages so as to accelerate the economical development and enhance the standard of living. Especially, it is conspicuous that we become more and more enjoying the particular benefits of assimilating alien culture. As an example, the pursuit of American films is prevailing among young generation. However, the flourish can not hide the flaws. Low culture is along with elegant culture. Moreover, the chaos of sex and the violence of the street are also glutted on the screen. Consequently, with the vulgar culture, individuals' outlook of life will surely be distorted, meaning that they can only obtain limited achievements rather than having become more distinguished in their life. Based on the above mentioned, I, therefore, will come up with an affirmative answer with no hesitation——"Absorb the essence and discard the dregs" is the best attitude we should take on the most controversial modern invention: Internet. Only in this feasible way can we achieve a better self and have a more prosperous, democratic, civilized and harmonious socialist country, catering to the new development philosophy of China.