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The relationship between nature and human beings has been a hot topic since the begining of 19th century,and as it shows nowadays, we human beings have done horrible things to the nature. Forests are destroyed for the woods we need to make furnitures and other things, waters are polluted because of the methods we take to improve the productivity of grains, and many so on. Granted, the environment we are living in has suffered a lot, but at present we should take positive steps to pay for the debts we owe. First, trees are needed not only in the big city also the countryside;secondly, the frequency of using cars should be reduced immediately which needs the support of the government like raising the taxes of gas and oil; last but not least, we human beings should feel sorry and shame for what we have done to the nature during the past century and try out biggest effort to pay it back. We definitely belive that if we everyone make a small step for the nature , we can leave clean air and blue sky to the next generations.
