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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
采用了恰当的衔接手法，层次清晰；文中高级词汇使用熟练，在单词拼写方面要继续努力；从句数量不足，可适当增加从句和复杂句的使用。
Electronic Communication Cannot Repalce Face-to-Face Contact The picture above is a interesting description of a phenomenon that communication between teenagers and their parents is usually through Internet. We have to acknowledge internet have been changed our life style and contact way which we usually communit others like this picture ways. but shortcoming of this way, I belive everyone can list many terms. First, use internt contact others is very conveniency and also have many negative aspects like maybe make us relationship have some gaps etc. Second, we talk somethings prefer face-to-face and not instead of in internet which look cold screen Finally, I have been said a lot of about this things and I belived everyone can beat internet and put down your smartphone, go out of house and look nature. if we do this like I said. I think this phenomenon will be better.
可可英语 - 划词释义
