小学二年级英语作文:Our house

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Our house. Our house is not my own. I rent it.I must pay 1400 yuan per month for it. It's such expensive, that it make me want to escape from the city. Shanghai is a high consumption city, which was called as "Hell City" by the youth.Our house is about 25 squire meters. Our house is on the third floor, it is garret. It has a kitchen,a washroom and a bedroom. It has four windows, three doors. In the kitchen, there is a kitchen ventilator. In the washroom, there is a washer. In the corner of the bedroom, we put a freezer there.