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字数:300 满分:100分
语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者在句法层面做的很棒;文中词汇使用较丰富,但高级词汇使用太少。
As we all know,saving is a good way to prove our life better.To be a student,saving money is the most important thing . For example,we all like to follow the fashion,if we get some coupons what can make us save a lot of money. In the resturant,you may order several dishes which will waste your money or you can share with your friends not only save the money but also the food will be saved. From above what l said ,we should be careful money in our daily life. In my opinion,saving money is a good hobby .