2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

作者词汇基础不错，还请增加高级词汇的使用；错误句子很少，但从句使用不熟练；上下文衔接稍显不流畅。

In my view,shanghai is the most interesting place in china which is my hometown. Shanghai in an modern city,so it is suitable for foreign to visit. As we all know, shanghai will opened the national movie festival every year.You can join the big party and have a lot of fun. For example,you can see many movie stars at the same time. Not only Breathe the fresh air but also enjoy the music .Then,you can go to eat shanghai traditional snacks in Yu Garden. In the end ,shopping on the Nanjing road may be a best choice. Come to shanghai and find the beautiful.