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Dear Mr.Wang I'm very sorry to tell you that I'm going to qiut my job from our company.I was realy expect to be an editor two months ago.But now,I find the job is not what I expected.So I decide to give up this job. I want to be an editor who can take photos from all over the world and then write esseies by myself,rather than sit behind the computer from day to night.It's not my ideal work situation. All in all,thanks for your help in these days,I'm very sorry to disturb your work schedul.I'm looking forward to your reply.I'll appreciate it if you can reply as soon as you can. yours sincerely, Li Ming
