托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；作者能较灵活地使用高级词汇，但要注意减少拼写错误；句法知识掌握不错，但文中从句数量偏少。

In my opinion, snap judgements can never be trusted. A count of factors should be considered when we make a judgement. A judgement could be seen as a dicision in a certain extent. As we know, wether time is suitable, if terrain is allowed and if members surround us are in hamorny were raised in Master Sun's Art of War. These is the basic points which should be considered of in war. Or the army would lose the fighting. Consequently, making judgements comprehensively can do favor to the winning of the war. A series of unfamiliar sections may exist in the area which you will set down judgements. Supposing having a judgement ahead of careful analyzing, it's easily to be failed eventualy. In the construction industry, a building address couldn't be settled only by investigatedwhether the soil could hold the hight of building. Besides, surrounding environment, population, economy and policy, bove of all should be considered into judgements. On the contrary, providing having made a snap jugement without much engagement, just alike a tree with no roots. In the Three Kingdoms period, officier Su Ma who lost the block was killed by the general Zhuge Liang, since he faught without thinking objectively, but faught as the book said. Lastly, the different factors between two wars contribute to this lose.