托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

作者能较灵活地使用高级词汇，但要注意减少拼写错误；恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词，衔接手法做的很棒；复杂句使用不错，句法规范。

In my opinion, snap judgements can never be trusted. Lots of factors should be taken into considering when we make a judgement. A judgement could be seen as a decision in a certain extent. As we know, wether time is suitable, if terrain is allowed and if members surround us are in harmony were raised in Master Sun's Art of War. These are the basic points which should be considered of in war. Or the army would lose the fighting. Consequently, making judgements comprehensively can do favor to the winning of the war. A series of unfamiliar sections may exist in the area which you will set down judgements. Supposing having a judgement ahead of careful analyzing, it is easily to fail eventually. In the construction industry, a building address couldn't be settled only by investigated whether the soil could hold the hight of building. Besides, environment, population, economy and policy, bove of all should be considered into judgements. On the contrary, providing having made a snap jugement without much engagement, just alike a tree with no roots. In the Three Kingdoms period, officier Ma Su who lost the block was killed by the general Zhuge Liang, since he faught without thinking objectively, but faught as the book said. Lastly, the different factors between two wars contribute to this lose. In addition, we need to consider conprehensively when make judgements to make sure that it can be succeed.