托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

作者词汇基本功很好，高级词汇表达也比较恰当；作者在句法层面做的很棒；恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词，衔接手法做的很棒。

In my opinion, snap judgements can never be trusted. Lots of factors should be taken into considering when we make a judgement. A judgement could be seen as a decision in a certain extent. As we know, wether time is suitable, if terrain is allowed and if members surround us are in harmony were raised in Master Sun's Art of War. These are the basic points which should be considered of in war. Or the army would lose the fighting. Consequently, making judgements comprehensively can do favor to the winning of the war. A series of unfamiliar sections may exist in the area which you will set down judgements. Supposing having a judgement ahead of careful analyzing, it is easy to fail eventually. In the construction industry, a building address couldn't be settled only by investigated whether the soil could hold the hight of building. Besides, environment, population, economy and policy all should be considered into judgements. On the contrary, providing having made a snap judgement without much engagement, just alike a tree with no roots. In the Three Kingdoms periods, officer Ma Su who lost the street was killed by the general Zhuge Liang, since he fought without thinking objectively, but fought as the book said. Lastly, different situation between two wars made Ma Su's failed. In addition, we need to consider comprehensively when we make judgements to make sure that it can be successful.