2.短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数。 词数100左右
正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;文章词汇表达灵活恰当,也能较熟练地使用一定的高级词汇;衔接词汇很少,建议加强过渡词和连接词的积累。
In our daily life we have too many worries. It depends on your homework or your friends. When you fail your test you might feel very sad and unhappy. So you worry your test in many times. 50 percent of students think the homework is too much. So we have to spend many times to finish the homework. So we have less time to have a rest. When we finish we always feel very tired and unhappy. 30 percent of students think parents are very serious and they always ask us to get great grads in test. If we fail the test, they will rush us. So we do not have many communication. 20 percent of students think they have less time to play sports. So they are not very healthy. We should communicate more with our parents. It can help our parents understand us. It is very improtant for us to improve our relationship with our parents.