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从句使用不熟练；文中词汇使用较丰富恰当，但高级词汇表达还需要很大提升；衔接词汇很少，建议加强过渡词和连接词的积累。
In our daily life we have too many worries. It depends on your homework or your friends. When you fail your test, you might feel very sad and unhappy. So you worry about your test in many times. 50 percent of students think the homework is too much. So we have to spend many times in finishing the homework. So we have less time to have a rest. When we finish we always feel very tired and unhappy. 30 percent of students think parents are very serious and they always ask us to get great grads in test. If we fail the test, they will rush us. So we do not have many communications. 20 percent of students think they have less time to play sports. So they are not very healthy. We should communicate more with our parents. It can help our parents understand us. It is very important for us to improve our relationship with our parents.
