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文中词汇使用较丰富恰当，但高级词汇表达还需要很大提升；若加强一些复杂句和从句的使用，文章会更棒；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳。
In our daily life we have too many worries. It depends on your homework or your friends. When you fail your test, you might feel very sad and unhappy. So you worry about your test in many times. On the one hand, fifty percent of students think the homework is too much. So we have to spend many times in finishing the homework. So we have less time to have a rest. When we finish we always feel very tired and unhappy .On the other hand, thirty percent of students think parents are very serious and they always ask us to get great grade in test. If we fail the test, they will rush us. So we do not have many communications. Twenty percent of students think they have less time to play sports. So they are not very healthy. We should communicate more with our parents. It can help our parents understand us. It is very important for us to improve our relationship with our parents. If you do these, you will get along well with your parents.
