增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;作者词汇量有些小,要注意检查拼写错误;文中基本没有过渡词和衔接词,建议增加衔接词汇的积累。
My best friend is Franklin. He is a tall and smart boy. He lives near my house. We often go to school tegther. Today we talked about the ellection of the president. we all like Mr. Trump. We can't understand why many people don't like him. We are worrying about the future of USA.