正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;文中词汇表达不够丰富,高级词汇方面要多累积;文中基本没有过渡词和衔接词,建议增加衔接词汇的积累。
My best friend is Franklin. He is a tall and smart boy. He lives near my house. We often go to school togther. Today we talked about the election of the president. We all like Mr. Trump. We can't understand why many people don't like him. We are worrying about the future of USA.