正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;希望作者可以加强词汇表达多样性,尤其是高级词汇的积累;文中基本没有过渡词和衔接词,建议增加衔接词汇的积累。
My best friend is Franklin. He is a tall and smart boy. He lives near my house. We often go to school together. Today we talked about the election of the president. We all like Mr. Trump. We can't understand why many people don't like him. We are worrying about the future of USA.