2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦171:中考

复杂句使用不错，句法规范；请作者增加高级词汇的使用，不过单词拼写做的很好；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

I'm going to have an online English lesson.It allows me to take a lesson anytime and anywhere and bring me so much convenience and have a high cost effective as well. after finishing the course, I may pick a good place to stay a few day. Since the winter is coming and the weather will be getting colder, an island in the southeast Asia with a warm wind and a big beach is a best choice. If you could come with me , I would be very joyful.