新课标八年级下学期期末测试冲刺复习专题书面表达（2）：给大卫的一封信

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My name is Chen Qian Yesterday,I received a e-mail letter which was from my penfriend David .As I knew , he will go to lanzhou for learning chinese after days. He wants to know how to learn chinese .If you want to learn chinese, you must to use the words that you know contact with the local people . That is the way how to learn this language ,just like we learn english as well .At the same time , I will give you my help to improve your chinese ,and show you how to use it correct . Then you can realize your dream ,and use this language so easily.