初中英语命题作文真题演练(60):假如你有一百万

希望作者可以加强词汇表达多样性，尤其是高级词汇的积累；作者句法知识扎实，可适当增加从句的使用；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。

If I have 1million, I am going to travel around the world with my family. We are going to stay the best hotel and eat all kinds of delicious food. Then we return home and buy a big house with a beautiful garden. If I have 1 million, I am going to help some poor children to go to school, To help some poor person to change their fate.