参考词汇:
中秋节 the Mid-Autumn Festival 农历 lunar calendar
赏月 enjoy the full moon 月饼 moon cake文中用词灵活多样,但要注意增加使用高级词汇;从句数量偏少;文章层次清晰分明,但是文中很少使用过渡词和衔接词。
A festival for togetherness is held once a year in China. It is The Mid-Autumn Festival. For on this day, All people that have been in other place return their homes. As they are expected to be hungry after long journey, food is laid out for them. Red lanterns are hung outside each house and in the street, it is a moving spectacle. Their father and mother stand outside the house to waiting for them. All night long, people dance and sing. We enjoy the full moon and eat moon cake together. The follow holiday, we can travel or visit our friends. We leave home for working or learning when the festive is over. The red lanterns are put into the warehouse for waiting next festive.