2005年6月18日英语四级作文真题:教师节

作者应增加文中长句和从句和使用；作者词汇量积累很好，高级词汇积累要重视；过渡词和衔接词使用不恰当，缺少组织，可适当增加连接词的使用。

Today is teacher"s day .First of all ,I must say " have a good day" to the teachers all over the word .And I will think you for my own teacher. I think teachers not only our teacher but also our nice friend .I am very shy and I never talk with my classmates .I never answer the questions on the class. I don't know what should I do. But my teacher find me and give me some advises when I am puzzling with this. She tell me that I am a warm girl and if I want to make friends with others I will be a good friend . I try to do what she said. I really make some friends who can listen to me and play with me. I think I should have a good study and repay the motherland. That is the best I can do for her .