2005年6月18日英语四级作文真题:教师节

作者应增加文中长句和从句和使用；作者词汇量积累很好，高级词汇积累要重视；过渡词和衔接词使用不恰当，缺少组织，可适当增加连接词的使用。

Today is teacher"s day. First of all, I must say " have a good day" to the teachers all over the word. And I will think you for my own teacher. I think teachers not only our teacher but also our nice friend. I am very shy and I never talk with my classmates. I never answer the questions on the class.I don't know what I should do. When I feel confused my teacher found me and gave me some Suggestions. She tell me that I am a warm girl and if I want to make friends with others I will be a good friend. I try to do what she said. I really make some friends who can listen to me and play with me. I think I should have a good study and repay the motherland. That is the best I can do for her.