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2005年6月18日英语四级作文真题:教师节

发布时间:2013-05-17 00:23浏览次数:1111
要求:
Teacher‟s Day :    
1. 向老师致以节日的问候。   
2. 回忆件老师的教诲中难忘的事情。   
3. 我如何报答老师。
用户的作文(系统评分62.5分
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作者词汇量积累不错,高级词汇积累较少;复杂句使用不错,句法规范;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。

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National Teacher Day is always the Tuesday of the first full week of May. And it is always for our students to give our special thanks to our lovely teacher. I still remember last year when I was feeling lost,down and out,I had no idea about my life,my love,my study even doubt why I was here in the world.So then came so much wine and smoke,I was tired,physical and mental.I even wanted to end my life just jumping from the top of our building. Then my teacher came to me, she said she knew what I was afraid of, she also told me that's very common like many young people of my age. She told me to call her anytime I need her help.I did so ,we often chat miracle and made some phone call.I just can't remember when come the mirical.I have found myself now!!! Another teacher's day,to all the teachers,to our parents.

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