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3． 参考词汇：经济困难 financial problem
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I am Li Hua,I am a middle school student.I like studing languageand I want to go to the University of Brighton to study English where in England. My hobbies are stamp colletion and reading, I like reading best,and I am good at playing the piano and dancing.I want to know what you demands when student entrance school and what service the shool will provide.My uncle living in the Nottingham of British,I visited him last year and he was very happy to met me.My uncle promised that he would funding for my tuition,and I wouldn`t have financial problem.
