2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

文章衔接手法恰当；文中一些从句的使用为文章增色；用词灵活多样，但高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间。

provided that my foreign friend want to visit my hometown,I will invite him to visit the TengWwangGe. in the past of thousands years, TengWangGe did not transformed a lot.although the modern society developed so fast,a lot of deeply culture was always in there.TengwangGe was a famous ancient buildings in NanChang. it is a charming place,and a lot of beautiful and colorful buildings were built in there.Nanchang was a good destination to travel,it was popular with both of chinese visitors and foreign friends.in the end,i want to told my foreign friend that wherever you go,no matter what is the weather,always bring you own sunshine.from my perspective,life was like a box of chocolates,you never know what you will gonna get.the word is so big,you can just go out to see some intersting things.