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2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:28浏览次数:5475
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题目 How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent?
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1.目前不少父母为孩子包办一切
2.为了让孩子独立, 父母应该……
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At present there have a large amount of parent that want to take care of all of their children.Like make choice, choose the future and coat. But it was bad for the child to independent, because the child will grow up and they must make choice by themself. But the parents limit the children to make choose by themself, that would leds to the children independent.So, in my opinion, the parents can take the following advice. First is do not help the children do they can do by themself. Second, parents not only give the advice for the children, but also can give them one cup of water. Third, leave them in a great enviroment like a close school. And, do not so worried the children, they will meet the best friends and teachers. They will help the children to comfort the independent enviroment.

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