2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；从句使用量不足；作者词汇表达丰富度较高，就是高级词汇用的太少。

At present there has a amounts parent that wants to take care about all their children.Like make choice, choose the future and coat. But it was bad for the child to independent, because the child will grow up and they must make a choice by themself. But the parents limit the children to make choose by themselves, that would led to the children independent.So, in my opinion, the parents can take the following advice. First is do not help the children do they can do by themselves. Second, parents not only give the advice for the children, but also can give them one cup of water. Third, leave them in a great environment like a close school. And, do not so worried the children, they will meet the best friends and teachers. They will help the children to comfort the independent environment.