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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
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1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
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From:hubin@163.com To:KPOHsales@hotmail.com Hello, I am Hubin. On Dec.15th to Dec. 22nd during the exhibition in New York,I knew the new production of your complay.Its number is 5670. I'm very interesting on it.I hope we can coorperate. Please send a price list and instruction for us.Thanks for your cooperation,wish we can establish bussiness relationship.
