2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

文章结构不错，使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词；错误句子很少，但从句使用不熟练；文中词汇表达较为灵活，高级词汇需要加强，单词拼写要认真。

At present, Online shoppng became a fashion. In my opinion, online shopping not only have many benifits, but also have many problems. I have some advices about how to be better use the online. First, we should be cleave and smart that we can buy the thing we really need. Second, we can buy something we could not in our city and instead of online shopping. Third, we can find a various of things. There have some advice to kill the problems. First, be careful to shopping. Second, to buy a acount that your can look twice or three assistants. Third, do not believe the faulse imfomation.