2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

文中应增加从句和复合句的使用；不能熟练使用过渡词，文章结构欠佳；文章用词太过单一，且单词拼写错误较多；可以适当增加副词的使用；连词使用偏少。

There are a picture above about education pays, and we can see some information from the picture. The left is unemployment rate in 2011, and we can see that the people who has the doctoral degree and professional degree more easy get job than others. The unemployment rate average in 2011 is 7.6%. The right we can see the blue part is median weekly earnings in 2011.And we can learn from the part that the people who has doctoral degree and professional degree gets well pays,and the people who has master's degree gets the medile pays, the other gets less pays.And the median weekly earning average is 797 doaller in 2011. From this infoemation above the picture,i get a ideal that knowledge changes our life,we must hard to study and we can make our great life through study.