2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

错误句子很少，但从句使用不熟练；文章结构不错，使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词；作者能较恰当使用丰富词汇，在高级词汇方面希望能更熟练一些

At present, Online shopping became a fashion. In my opinion, online shopping not only has many benefits, but also has many problems. I have much advice about how to be better use the online. First, we should be cleave and smart that we can buy the thing we really need. Second, we can buy something we could not in our city and instead of online shopping. Third, we can find a various of things. There have some advice to kill the problems. First, be careful to shopping. Second, to buy a acount that your can look twice or three assistants. Third, do not believe the faulse imfomation.