高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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my hometown long time a go i have a very beautiful hometown, glasses, trees ,flowers, were all over the road,the river were very clean,even though the house is not beautiful but,all the people are friendly and hospitable but now , in my hometown have lots of high building ,many cars,many factories, people cut the tree to built a wood house and river is got smell . so i think my hometown need to be protected. government should notice these problems and deal them.