2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

从句数量偏少；文章结构不错，使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词；文中能使用多样的词汇表达，也能较好的使用一些高级词汇。

At present, Online shopping became a fashion. In my opinion, online shopping not only has many benefits, but also has many problems. I have much advice about how to be better to use the online. First, we should be cleave and smart that we can buy the thing we really need. Second, we can buy something that we could not buy in our city and instead of online shopping. Third, we can find a various things. There is much advice to kill the problems. First, be careful to shopping. Second, to buy an account that your can look twice or three assistants. Third, do not believe the false imformation.