2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

如若适当增加一些从句的使用，文章会取得更好的成绩；作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达，但高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间；文章结构不错，使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词。

At present, Online shopping became a fashion. In my opinion, online shopping not only has many benefits, but also has many problems. I have much advice about how to be better to use the online. First, we should be cleave and smart that we can buy the thing we really need. Second, we can buy something that we could not buy in our city and instead of online shopping. Third, we can find a various things. There is much advice to kill the problems. First, be careful to shopping. Second, to buy an account that you can look twice or three assistants. Third, do not believe the false information.