2009年12月英语四级作文真题:建设绿色校园

作者句法知识较为扎实，可增加复合句和从句使用；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨；请作者增加词汇丰富度，增加高级词汇的使用，改正文中拼写错误。

Both creating a green campus and improving the education for all-around development are inportant. Green campus not full of the tree but rather eduction, not symthpatic but rather thought. It is inportant that the school should develop the level of the students thought. Now, it is high time that the school should fit.