句式变化较为明显,可适当增加从句的使用;请注意积累词汇量,还要注意单词拼写;过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。
Both creating a green campus and improving the education for all-around development are important. Green campus not full of the tree but rather eduction, not sympathtic but rather thought. It is important that the school should inprove the level of the students thought. Now, it is high time that the school should fit.