2009年12月英语四级作文真题:建设绿色校园

作者句法基础不错，可适当增加复杂句的使用；文章用词太过单一，请注意变换表达方式；过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。

Both creating a green campus and improving the education for all-around development are important. Green campus not full of the tree but rather eduction, not sympathtic but rather thought. It is important that the school should improve the level of the students thought. Now, it is high time that the school should fit.