文中高级词汇使用较丰富,但请注意积累词汇量;可适当增加复合句和从句的使用;过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。
Both creating a green campus and improving the education for all-around development are important. Green campus not full of the tree but rather eduction, not physically but rather thought. It is important that the school should improve the level of the students thought. Now, it is high time that the school should fit.