使用了部分简单的长难句,可适当增加一些复杂的长句;请注意积累词汇量,文中词汇表达贫乏;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。
Both creating a green campus and improving the education for all-around development are important. Green campus not full of the tree but rather eduction, not physically but rather thought. It is important that the school should improve the level of the students thought. Now, it is high time that the school should fit. It is happy that the society wannt to see that.