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How To Be Careful With Our Money There are many ways for we students to save money. As far as I am concerned,the easiest way is spnding as less money as we can,we can buythings when they are on sale,or collect coupons. I have every reason to say that it is a good way to save money.I used to be careless with the money from my parents,and I could use up all the money I have when I went out.As I grow older,I got aware of the difficulty of making money,and began to save money.I come to the mall when things there are on sale,and buy things that I am in need of,accordingly,I spend much less money and have some savementnow. As my experience shows,we are still smart consumers when we save money.
