2009年12月英语四级作文真题:建设绿色校园

文章用词太过单一，请作者增加词汇丰富度；可适当增加复合句和从句的使用；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

Both creating a green campus and improving the education for all-around development are important. Green campus not full of the tree but rather eduction, not physically but rather thought. It is important that the school should improve the level of the students thought. Now, it is high time that the school should fit. It is happy that the society wants to see that.