2009年12月英语四级作文真题:建设绿色校园

文章在句法方面做的很棒，从句和复杂句的使用不错；请作者增加词汇表达的丰富度；不能熟练使用过渡词，文章结构欠佳。

Both creating a green campus and improving the education for all-around development are important. Green campus not full of the tree but rather eduction, not physically but rather thought. It is important that the school should improve the students thought level. Now, it is high time that the school should fit. It is happy that the society wants to see that. It is well known that the university has many great diathesiss.