2009年12月英语四级作文真题:建设绿色校园

作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达，但高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间；可适当增加复合句和从句的使用；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

Both creating a green campus and improving the education for all-around development are important. In my opinion the green campus not full of the tree but rather eduction, not physically but rather thought. It is important that the school should improve the students thought level. Now, it is high time that the school should fit. It is happy that the society wants to see that. It is well known that the university has many great diathesis students.